Feedback

Blogging Checklist

I have received extra feedback from my teacher. Since we are getting closer to our deadlines I have a personal checklist of stuff that i need to add to the blog in order to get my grade up. With this feedback I know what i need to do and how i can improve my blog post.
Before Friday I plan to have completed this checklist and updated my blog.

BEAU

Taken

Taken- We have used taken as inspiration for our title sequence.

The signiture colour red is something that we are plan to use with our titles and with filters over our scenes. 

The continuous music used to create a horror effect is something that we also plan to use in our title sequence. 

We don't plan to copy everything from Taken however when watching our title sequence it will be obvious what our inspiration was.

Feedback

FEEDBACK FROM ONE ON ONES-

The feedback I got from my one on ones told me what I was lacking from my blogging and what I was doing well. When it comes to the planning for filming and the pitch I was told that I was doing very well. I was clear about what our plan for our title sequence was.

What I was- told to improve was the rate of which I blog. I need to blog more instead of blogging all at once in one day. Every time that we film or we edit it would benefit me if I blogged straight after that.

What I have done since my feedback

• I have made a diary of filming so that when we film I blog straight after it.
• I have been screen shotting all the editing we have been doing and blogging it.
• I have been getting feedback from students and using it to improve our title sequences.

Planned Titles

Production Company

'WATCHED'

1) Summer Borland


2) Bushra Ali


3) Director- Beau McNamara


4) Producer- Summer Borland


5) Music Director- Bushra Ali


6) Writer- Beau McNamara


7) Costume Director- Bushra Ali

8) Editor- Beau McNamara 

9) Written by- Summer Borland

10) Director of Photography- Bushra Ali

Evaluaion of Rough Cut

Evaluation of Rough Cut:

From completing our rough cut we have learned what we are doing well and what it is we need to improve on.
The different scenes and the random order of our rough cut highlights the decretive title sequence we are aiming for. We used different colours and some slow motion to make our title sequence have the genre of thriller/ horror. It also makes our title sequence more interesting.

We have many improvements to make before our title sequence is perfect. We need improve the transition between the scenes so our title sequences flow better. Also from the feedback we have got we know that we have to add more scenes to our title sequence. At the moment it is very short however we filmed many scenes so we have a widened variety to choose from. This will benefit us to make our final title sequence longer. Our rough cut at the moment does not have any titles apart from our movie name and production company. We plan to add many more for our final title sequences.

garage band - rough cut

This is a rough cut of our soundtrack that we made on garage band , we was just looking around at the different sounds that we could of used in our title sequence, because our rough copy of the title sequence wasn't ready when we was doing so we couldn't have have the film in the background so we had to guess where to put sounds. However , at the end we come up with some good ideas to use.